Jeeves and the Final Whassit
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Part one of the Jeeves in space story is up and ready for your perusal. It can be found here:
http://horace-bulregard.deviantart.com/art/Jeeves-and-the-Final-Whassit-333796345?ga_submit=10%3A1350938023
It unfortunately has not been proofread by anyone aside from myself, so I apologize in advance for any issues I may have missed. Any suggestions you may have for it concerning grammar, narrative voice, plot trajectory, or anything else you can think of, would be most welcome.
http://horace-bulregard.deviantart.com/art/Jeeves-and-the-Final-Whassit-333796345?ga_submit=10%3A1350938023
It unfortunately has not been proofread by anyone aside from myself, so I apologize in advance for any issues I may have missed. Any suggestions you may have for it concerning grammar, narrative voice, plot trajectory, or anything else you can think of, would be most welcome.
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Date: 2012-11-03 04:35 am (UTC)I had a few thoughts on how that may have come about, actually. One was that his Uncle was close to this small, independent software company (probably a financial backer) and that Jeeves was a prototype that never actually hit the shelves due to the personality glitches and incompatibility issues. Another was that the small company went under, and so all of their wares were abruptly discontinued. Another still was that Jeeves, being the search engine they would use to look this up, simply lied to them. It would certainly be easier than competing with a gaggle of drones with copies of him. XD
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Date: 2012-11-04 04:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-11-04 07:08 am (UTC)Thank you very much, I'm glad that you enjoy it. ^^