Jeeves and the Final Whassit

[horacebulregard.livejournal.com]

Part one of the Jeeves in space story is up and ready for your perusal. It can be found here:

http://horace-bulregard.deviantart.com/art/Jeeves-and-the-Final-Whassit-333796345?ga_submit=10%3A1350938023

It unfortunately has not been proofread by anyone aside from myself, so I apologize in advance for any issues I may have missed. Any suggestions you may have for it concerning grammar, narrative voice, plot trajectory, or anything else you can think of, would be most welcome.

Comments

[godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com]

I have been dying to see what you came up with and this is simply brilliant!

I love the image to start with, and the language is spot-on and the reference to adobe patches and... this is just too wonderful for words. Fabulous. Topping. Corking.

[erynn999.livejournal.com]

If there is supposed to be a fic at that link, I can't find it. Have you posted it anywhere else?

[erynn999.livejournal.com]

Okay, nevermind, it downloaded a PDF file, which I hadn't been expecting.

[dogwoodblossom.livejournal.com]

Well done. You've got a lovely Wodehouse groove going on and you're doing some interesting sci fi stuff as well. Bring on the next installment!

[cat94208.livejournal.com]

This is absolutely brilliant! I can't wait to read more.

[eaivalefay.livejournal.com]

This is wildly brilliant! :D I want to read more!

“Well then what are you doing standing about? Take your phone and go hunt those wild bars!”

And that line is going to have me laughing all night long. I can just picture Bertie (and Jeeves) hunting down the best connection, standing in corners, under lamp shades, in the highest room of the tallest tower...

And I was wondering--and so very badly want to know--did Jeeves cause his own program to be replaced so quickly on the market? I don't know why, but somehow I can see him arranging that. He wouldn't want his Jeeves program running for users who do not meet the required standard after all. ;)