Fic: Oceans, part 8
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indeedsir_backupPairing: Bertie/Jeeves
Rating: PG-13
part 7 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/707880.html#cutid1
part 6 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/704354.html#cutid1
part 5 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/701596.html#cutid1
part 4 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/695505.html#cutid1
part 3 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/693063.html#cutid1
part 2 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/689461.html#cutid1
part 1 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/687730.html#cutid1
Disclaimer: I have no claim on the lovely works of Wodehouse.
I have always been drawn to noble men, elegant and graceful in their expensive finery, blue blood flushing their cheeks with carefree delight. Such men were satisfying to gaze at, yet I had never vied for their affection. They were out of my class, and if they looked twice at me at all, it would be as a plaything that they could soil and discard; and I do have my pride, as much as these young men have their arrogance. That was before I met Mr. Wooster, when every shred of good sense I have ever held regarding the possibility of taking a noble lover deserted me.
I was cautious, of course. I admired him, and it wasn’t long after we met that I was fighting to keep him, taking risks that could have easily cost me my position. I pushed him, bit by bit, to see how much of him I could have, and one day, he stopped pushing back. He was firmly under my control, and happier for it. I knew then that I would never abandon my post, or my gentleman.
He was not like the others. Mr. Wooster was kind, gentle, and amusing. He was intelligent enough to be interesting and foolish enough to be manipulated. He was not the type of man who would star in the cinema pictures. He was, perhaps, the charming sidekick of the hero, giving his all with no recognition. This made him all the more endearing to me, and, as I contemplated him awkwardly wrinkling his nose as he sniffed a cup of coffee one afternoon, I felt the weight of my feelings descend upon me. He was my ideal. Something beyond my understanding, luck, fate, or coincidence, had led me to this man, who would become mine, of this I felt quite certain. In all of the world, there was only him. From that moment on, I was hopelessly tied to him.
Having lost him once made having him again all the more precious. At this moment, he was singing in the bath, his light baritone echoing off the tiles. I was changing his bed linen, and paused to inhale the faint scent of him against the pillowcase. His scent is indescribable, a breath of which triggers memories of intimacy, of warm blankets and confessions and heady lust as much as tea, and bacon, and country houses.
I realized that the song had ceased, and I finished my task quickly, to return to him.
Having dressed him for the day, I tidied the bath and prepared him a drink. He had gravitated towards the piano, and was playing an old favorite of his, a ghastly music hall comedy song, made bearable only by the fact that it brought him such amusement. I placed the drink on the piano lid before him, and an odd expression crossed his wide blue eyes, his mouth opened slightly, and his nose wrinkled in exactly the way that made me want to cover it in kisses.
“I say!” He exclaimed, looking from the glass, to myself. “Put that down again, will you, Jeeves?”
“Sir?”
“The glass, Jeeves. Try that again.”
I removed the glass and placed it beside him once more, and he emitted a disappointed sigh.
“Sir?”
“I almost had it, Jeeves.” He groaned. “For a moment there, I almost remembered something. It was as if I had seen you place that glass there a thousand times before, only I knew it, instead of just knowing about it.”
“Déjà vu, sir.” I replied.
“No, no, not quite. Almost, Jeeves, but not quite. I remember this piano the most. Of all the things I could remember, it’s something that doesn’t expect me to.” He fell into a glum silence then.
“Perhaps there is something about music that triggers your memories, sir. I was reading an article in Modern Science which suggested that all of the senses trigger long stored memories, the senses of hearing and smell being particularly powerful in this respect.” This had been on my mind , of course. An idea began to take shape. “Perhaps we could use this approach to help you, sir.”
Mr. Wooster stood, and sniffed the cocktail. He gazed about him, and his eyes fell on me. “I want to remember.” He muttered, and before I could brace myself, he had shoved his nose into my collar. I was frozen in my place, his proximity making me ravenous with lust, yet unable to do anything about it.
The doorbell buzzed, sending a jolt through us both, distracted from the moment at hand. I was both relieved and annoyed. I strode into the sitting room quickly, for the visitor had become agitated, pressing the button firmly to produce a uniform, nerve shattering peal of bells.
I opened the door, and suddenly the bells seemed quite quaint and harmless, for before me stood Mrs.Gregson.
Rating: PG-13
part 7 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/707880.html#cutid1
part 6 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/704354.html#cutid1
part 5 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/701596.html#cutid1
part 4 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/695505.html#cutid1
part 3 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/693063.html#cutid1
part 2 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/689461.html#cutid1
part 1 http://community.livejournal.com/indeedsir/687730.html#cutid1
Disclaimer: I have no claim on the lovely works of Wodehouse.
I have always been drawn to noble men, elegant and graceful in their expensive finery, blue blood flushing their cheeks with carefree delight. Such men were satisfying to gaze at, yet I had never vied for their affection. They were out of my class, and if they looked twice at me at all, it would be as a plaything that they could soil and discard; and I do have my pride, as much as these young men have their arrogance. That was before I met Mr. Wooster, when every shred of good sense I have ever held regarding the possibility of taking a noble lover deserted me.
I was cautious, of course. I admired him, and it wasn’t long after we met that I was fighting to keep him, taking risks that could have easily cost me my position. I pushed him, bit by bit, to see how much of him I could have, and one day, he stopped pushing back. He was firmly under my control, and happier for it. I knew then that I would never abandon my post, or my gentleman.
He was not like the others. Mr. Wooster was kind, gentle, and amusing. He was intelligent enough to be interesting and foolish enough to be manipulated. He was not the type of man who would star in the cinema pictures. He was, perhaps, the charming sidekick of the hero, giving his all with no recognition. This made him all the more endearing to me, and, as I contemplated him awkwardly wrinkling his nose as he sniffed a cup of coffee one afternoon, I felt the weight of my feelings descend upon me. He was my ideal. Something beyond my understanding, luck, fate, or coincidence, had led me to this man, who would become mine, of this I felt quite certain. In all of the world, there was only him. From that moment on, I was hopelessly tied to him.
Having lost him once made having him again all the more precious. At this moment, he was singing in the bath, his light baritone echoing off the tiles. I was changing his bed linen, and paused to inhale the faint scent of him against the pillowcase. His scent is indescribable, a breath of which triggers memories of intimacy, of warm blankets and confessions and heady lust as much as tea, and bacon, and country houses.
I realized that the song had ceased, and I finished my task quickly, to return to him.
Having dressed him for the day, I tidied the bath and prepared him a drink. He had gravitated towards the piano, and was playing an old favorite of his, a ghastly music hall comedy song, made bearable only by the fact that it brought him such amusement. I placed the drink on the piano lid before him, and an odd expression crossed his wide blue eyes, his mouth opened slightly, and his nose wrinkled in exactly the way that made me want to cover it in kisses.
“I say!” He exclaimed, looking from the glass, to myself. “Put that down again, will you, Jeeves?”
“Sir?”
“The glass, Jeeves. Try that again.”
I removed the glass and placed it beside him once more, and he emitted a disappointed sigh.
“Sir?”
“I almost had it, Jeeves.” He groaned. “For a moment there, I almost remembered something. It was as if I had seen you place that glass there a thousand times before, only I knew it, instead of just knowing about it.”
“Déjà vu, sir.” I replied.
“No, no, not quite. Almost, Jeeves, but not quite. I remember this piano the most. Of all the things I could remember, it’s something that doesn’t expect me to.” He fell into a glum silence then.
“Perhaps there is something about music that triggers your memories, sir. I was reading an article in Modern Science which suggested that all of the senses trigger long stored memories, the senses of hearing and smell being particularly powerful in this respect.” This had been on my mind , of course. An idea began to take shape. “Perhaps we could use this approach to help you, sir.”
Mr. Wooster stood, and sniffed the cocktail. He gazed about him, and his eyes fell on me. “I want to remember.” He muttered, and before I could brace myself, he had shoved his nose into my collar. I was frozen in my place, his proximity making me ravenous with lust, yet unable to do anything about it.
The doorbell buzzed, sending a jolt through us both, distracted from the moment at hand. I was both relieved and annoyed. I strode into the sitting room quickly, for the visitor had become agitated, pressing the button firmly to produce a uniform, nerve shattering peal of bells.
I opened the door, and suddenly the bells seemed quite quaint and harmless, for before me stood Mrs.Gregson.
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Date: 2009-08-25 01:13 am (UTC)AAaaawiwantthenextpartnooooow c:
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Date: 2009-08-25 01:30 am (UTC)Just sayin'.
BEE TEE DUBBS, I LOVE THIS FIC.
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Date: 2009-08-25 01:57 am (UTC)These are all IMHO.
The rest is praise, as usual, The bit of Bertie sticking his nose on Jeeves' collar is just so very Wodehousean, lol, and Jeeves' inner speech is marvelous, you did capture really well that sense of "Good lord, I was just about to remember something but now it's gone", it is such a faint sentiment that it's marvelous it came through so well, without the following explanation, it was perfectly understandable, You describe Bertie's expressions very well, btw.
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Date: 2009-08-25 02:16 am (UTC)OH JEEVES. Getting all sad and sniffed. ;.;
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Date: 2009-08-25 09:34 pm (UTC)Ack!
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Date: 2009-08-25 03:23 am (UTC)I like the idea that Jeeves doing something as simple as putting down a glass would almost trigger Bertie's memory. <3
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Date: 2009-08-25 03:47 am (UTC)YOU are a tease, is what. All this Jeeves-smelling, and then AUNTS. Honestly. *sighs* Clearly, the only thing to do to make up for tormenting us all is to write a new chapter, and snappish-like. I know it's harsh, but one must be firm about such things. Yes, I think a new chapter quite soon is really the only thing for it XD
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Date: 2009-08-25 04:26 am (UTC)I was sure, so sure that Bertie's eyes at least would be alight with remembrance.
But honestly the masterpiece of this chapter was those first three paragraphs. Mmph, evocative and beautiful. I was especially struck by the characterization of a "noble lover" (which could be interpreted on several levels). It was very heartfelt and believable as a romance.
I was actually so satisfied with this update that i'm not ravenous for the next, but more than happy to wait patiently and trust you will write something equally wonderful.
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Date: 2009-08-25 09:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-25 05:22 am (UTC)The idea of smells and sounds triggering impressions is quite beautiful in its own stead, I wonder how they plan to use it.
A most alluring and curious Jeeves' introspection; he's such a mix of supercilious arrogance, ruthless scheming, and overpowering infatuation, that it makes him distinctly remarkable and also canon-wise believable.
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Date: 2009-08-25 07:54 am (UTC)Quite a suspenseful ending! I'll be thrilled when you update again!
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Date: 2009-08-25 09:41 pm (UTC)I will try to update soon!
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Date: 2009-08-25 08:45 am (UTC)This line wins :-) Jeeves is so precise in his characterizations :-)
Love his feelings, and his patience, and Bertie's slow recovery, and everything in your fic! :-) And I hope their courtship will continue despite all aunt Agathas :-))
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Date: 2009-08-25 01:32 pm (UTC)Squee for Bertie warming up again. :D
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Date: 2009-08-25 02:26 pm (UTC)Please, I wanna read the next part soon....
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Date: 2009-08-25 03:52 pm (UTC)\o/ Go, you!
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Date: 2009-08-26 04:02 am (UTC)Can has moar soon?
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Date: 2009-08-26 12:50 pm (UTC)-.- GREAT timing, as usual, the old dragon. Get the torches and pitchforks out!
Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
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