[identity profile] niektete.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] indeedsir_backup
A very cheery hello to you all!

I realize we're in the middle of a project here, what with bringing our boys around the world, but we can't live off nothing in between chapters, can we? No. So I bring pointless porn, of which there can never be too much.

Title: Rocky and the English Gents

Author: froggy ([livejournal.com profile] niektete)
Genre: PWP/Smut
Characters/pairing: Jeeves/Bertie/Rocky
Warnings: Three men having sex. Scared now?
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Valet/gentleman/poet smexings; what else is there to say? I don't even pretend to have a story line here. Rocky's POV.

Fic here

Date: 2009-07-13 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] princesshannah4.livejournal.com
It amuses me very VERY much that Rocky gets threesomed with Jeeves and Bertie more than Bertie gets slashed with Bingo :D

Is this fic open to critiquing? Because I have some feedbacky bits to say.

Date: 2009-07-13 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] princesshannah4.livejournal.com
First of all, I loved that you were trying something new by doing Rocky's POV, but considering the fact that he's a poet, I thought that his narration was a tad generic. Now, I'm sure he doesn't think in poetry, but I was expecting it to be a little more descriptive and ambient. However, the little bits of third-party first-person insight that you did have were pretty nice (I really did feel like I was discovering Jeeves and Bertie's bed-life for the first time). Also, as an American, I don't know if Rocky would be using the word "buttocks."

Overall, though, I thought it was a nice inventive twist to have Rocky narrate for once and I'd be interested in seeing more of it!

Date: 2009-07-15 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hazeltea.livejournal.com
I say buttocks and I am from NY. I think the only thing odd is Rocky's perception that the British are considered more friendly than Americans. Usually it is the other way around. One might get that idea around Bertie or the Drones, though.

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