[identity profile] melodygarnet.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] indeedsir_backup
So I'm trying out this new writing thingy and I thought that it seemed well-suited to a Jeeves and Wooster fic. Because I've never tried the technique before and this is my first real foray into writing fic for this fandom, I welcome any and all comments. What do you think about the notes, the format, the story, the characterization, ... ? Really, criticize away!
(don't know when and if the rest of the story will be written, depends on the response, really.)

Found among a collection of papers in lockbox under wooden floor of Berkeley Mansions apartment 6A during renovation.
TRANSCRIPT 1: Appears to be by the hand of the late famous author Bertram W. Wooster, handwriting similar to that in verified manuscripts.
TRANSCRIPT 2: Presumed to be by the hand of Reginald Jeeves, the late valet of Wooster. No verification.

Link to part 1 & 2

Well now you'll have to finish

Date: 2015-12-28 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasperjasper.livejournal.com
What happens next? Please tell us!

Date: 2015-12-28 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elliemorris.livejournal.com
I really like this style, as it's certainly something new from what I've seen. Very interesting so far; I'm dying to know what happens next!

Poor Bertie, being tricked like that by those devilish twins, and it's even worse on Jeeves's part, feeling like he could have prevented it from happening! Usually I find Claude and Eustace a load of laughs in this fandom, so it's unique to see the selfish, callous side of the supporting Jeeves and Wooster characters for once (as I do find most of those characters that are always asking Bertie to do things are rather selfish).

Date: 2015-12-29 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
I like the format a lot... Just a hint, though: you may want to put the text under a cut (or link to your journal) because it's so long.


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