experiment for jooster fic

[melodygarnet.livejournal.com]

So I'm trying out this new writing thingy and I thought that it seemed well-suited to a Jeeves and Wooster fic. Because I've never tried the technique before and this is my first real foray into writing fic for this fandom, I welcome any and all comments. What do you think about the notes, the format, the story, the characterization, ... ? Really, criticize away!
(don't know when and if the rest of the story will be written, depends on the response, really.)

TRANSCRIPTS

Found among a collection of papers in lockbox under wooden floor of Berkeley Mansions apartment 6A during renovation.
TRANSCRIPT 1: Appears to be by the hand of the late famous author Bertram W. Wooster, handwriting similar to that in verified manuscripts.
TRANSCRIPT 2: Presumed to be by the hand of Reginald Jeeves, the late valet of Wooster. No verification.

Link to part 1 & 2