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indeedsir_backupHopefully, this doesn't count as a repost. I revised Chapter Three since I didn't feel it was "strong" or in canon with Bertie Wooster as depicted by Wodehouse or the series. The frog situation is now going to be in Chapter Four, and there is a major spoiler in Chapter Three if you take the time to translate Jeeve's conversation with Dr. Pendergrast.
Check out the new version, and let me know what you think.
KR907
Check out the new version, and let me know what you think.
KR907
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