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*newcomer shuffles feet shyly and looks at the floor*

I discovered this fandom some five years ago, but in the last month or so I've come back to take another look and fallen head over heels for the stuff you guys do. And then Jooster got mixed up with a bunch of things I was thinking about and then I wrote a pair of drabbles, the 100-word kind, which are not nearly adequate thanks for the amazing fic I've been reading. So. Here those are.

Title: Service
Rating: G
Words: 200
Disclaimer: I most definitely don't own these characters.
Summary: A few thoughts on influence. Gen.

1.
On coming into contact with B.W. Wooster's exuberant aimlessness, some are infected by it and some try to serve as a corrective to it. Jeeves naturally chooses the latter. He has never risen so punctually as now, when he could easily sleep an hour later or even two. He writes down every appointment, even those that are made ten minutes before they occur. On visits to Brinkley, the staff feel his presence like a ticking metronome.

His occasional visits to the National Gallery are growing longer, however, and it is just possible a passer-by could tell which paintings he liked.

2.
It is a privilege and an embarrassment to be Jeeves' employer--a privilege to have a paragon of wisdom and industry in the household, an embarrassment to measure up to him so poorly. Acting as a valet delivery service for friends and relations in need, while pretending to be on a social call, only highlights Bertie's own superfluity.

Usefulness is not a Wooster specialty. He knows golf, the piano; he would never consider entering an office and cannot summon opinions to write to the Mirror. He writes Jeeves down instead, working more steadily than he ever did at scripture knowledge.

Date: 2010-07-10 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] storyfan.livejournal.com
These are lovely.

Date: 2010-07-10 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soul-bonnie.livejournal.com

Oh, I like them! Esp. the second one although I think it's quite sad. :'(

Hope to read more from you really soon!

Date: 2010-07-10 07:01 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] woe-in-a-hoodie.livejournal.com
These are fabulous drabbles! I get a sort of feeling that the narrative voice is a private detective or something who's studying the two of them. Good show!

Date: 2010-07-11 03:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] woe-in-a-hoodie.livejournal.com
Hey, if you think about it, all fanfic authors are private detectives in a way. We poke around in the information we're given and draw our own conclusions. We delve into the previously unknown emotions and events in characters' lives.

SO I HEREBY PRESENT YOU WITH THIS:

Image

:D

Date: 2010-07-13 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toodlepipsigner.livejournal.com
I have never seen an MST3K icon, but I shall have to compliment you on it.

Date: 2010-07-10 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erynn999.livejournal.com
There's something beautiful but a little sad about both of these and the way they show how these two have, if you will, bent around one another to accommodate each other.

Date: 2010-07-10 08:39 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] random-nexus.livejournal.com
These are both excellent! Different sides of the same sitch, and very well done! Good intro to ficcery, you!

:D

Date: 2010-07-10 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toodlepipsigner.livejournal.com
Oh, I do hope we see more of you! These are marvelous even in their brevity. Adored! Well done!

Date: 2010-07-10 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] niektete.livejournal.com
I love that he "writes Jeeves down"; it's just what he does in the books, isn't it? Aaw ^^ These are, like Story said, lovely!

Drabbles: Service

Date: 2010-07-11 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rose-gialle.livejournal.com
Oh yes, beautiful and succinct character studies. Very nicely done.

Date: 2010-07-11 05:39 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-07-11 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truly-bohemian.livejournal.com
These are so elegantly and subtly written. It's very different to the way Wodehouse would have written, as it has to be considering the melancholy tone you're going for, but it suits the characters and the era beautifully.

I can only hope you'll build on them. They seem to be the beginnings of a very interesting story. But they also work perfectly just as they are. There is, after all, a lot to be said for leaving things to the imagination. :3

Date: 2010-07-11 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] triedunture.livejournal.com
Awwww these are so good! I especially like the very last line about Bertie working so hard to write his stories.

Date: 2010-07-11 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lupus-malus.livejournal.com
You've done a lot with so few words. I really like these, especially the phrase "valet delivery service".

Date: 2010-07-13 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emeraldreeve.livejournal.com
Wonderful drabbles! My favourite lines are: On visits to Brinkley, the staff feel his presence like a ticking metronome. and the last one of the 2nd. I like the acknowledgement that Bertie does work.

Date: 2010-07-29 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] petronelle.livejournal.com
Oh, this is lovely. You capture Jeeves' steadiness so well.

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