Fic: The Long Long Trail, Part 11/15

[juliacarmen.livejournal.com]

Part 11 Rating: NC-17
Fic Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Bertie/Jeeves
Summary: Jeeves and Bertie meet again after a long separation during World War II.
Disclaimer: Jeeves and Bertie belong to Wodehouse. I’m just taking them for a spin.
Warning: Sex!
Notes: Many thanks to Mrs_dalliard and Zekkass for betaing this monster of a fic! The remaining aberrations were perped by me.

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Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10

Part 11: Say Please

Comments

[charie-caphine.livejournal.com]

The porn is hot. Very. But I don't necessarily see how it's vital to the storyline, and in such detail. The only thing one discovers in this part is something of Jeeves' vast experience.
The tailor, the doctor, and the cobbler - quite an assemblage. In the previous chapter Jeeves was right on the mark wondering at the fairy tale feel of the affair. One explanation is that it's all an elaborate trap!

[juliacarmen.livejournal.com]

The porn was not the least bit necessary to the storyline and could have been condensed into one sentence: "They made love that night as quietly as they could in the small bed of the small room that had once belonged to the Schneider's son."
I would say the setup is a bit too elaborate for a trap, but the real trap is even more elaborate, so nevermind :-) According to William Stevenson in "Spymistress," there were quite a few Germans who disliked the Nazis and hoped the Allies would do something about it. I have no idea whether this is true or not, but it was convenient for the fic to take Stevenson at his word.

[charie-caphine.livejournal.com]

The real trap? Doesn't that sound mouth-wateringly promising!

[jihime47.livejournal.com]

DIRTY! *grins*

[juliacarmen.livejournal.com]

^_^

[storyfan.livejournal.com]

There are only four parts left - that makes me sad because I'm enjoying the story very much. However, I do have this uneasy feeling in my stomach that all is not as it should be. I will not rest easy until the boys are back in London. And I do hope nothing awful happens to the Schneiders.

[juliacarmen.livejournal.com]

You think they will be safe in London? *evil g.*

[storyfan.livejournal.com]

All right. Safe in New York. Safe in Chicago. Safe in Podunk. Just so they're safe. Please? Oh, yeah. And the sex was pretty hot, too.

[chaoticchaos13.livejournal.com]

I'M SO SCARED OMG....