Story in need of a beta

[storyfan.livejournal.com]

 I have a  story ready to go, but I think a beta should look at it first. It's a bit on the frisky side, well to be frank, it's mostly all frisky. It's about 1300 words if that makes a difference. I can email it to whomever wants to look at it. I want to remove any glaring Americanisms as well as adjust any...mechanics. Any takers?

This is my first fanfic of any kind, so I'd also appreciate it if my beta would be honest and tell me to take up knitting instead of Jooster writing.

Comments

[fstohell.livejournal.com]

Well it looks like you've already got an offer but, if you need a second opinion or something then I'd be willing to help out.

[storyfan.livejournal.com]

I'd appreciate your looking at it. And you also must be honest and tell me if it's awful.