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[godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com]

Hello kind community members.

I normally blithely post things and let the chips fall (Apologies if that was unmannerly--I happened upon this community after getting hooked on the work of Mice and Random Nexus in Ao3).

I have something in the hopper that's been giving me pause and was wondering if there were any brave souls willing to give it a glance?  It's the sequel to that last 'spyverse' tale (no one dies and the ending is happy). It's longish--about 17,000 words, and any help would be deeply appreciated.

Rummy comment warning: things got a bit out of hand in crack pairing land.  Please be cautious with the links. AND also the lower comments... please keep animals (especially newts) and small children away

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[godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com]

That's just wrong... how could you pollute the X-hatch? Besides, it is a truth universally known that Spode's undergarments are floral and/or lace-trimmed silk satin... and wait a minute... are you making Bertie and Jeeves WATCH?!

That's just terrible. *sniff*

[laeticiav.livejournal.com]

I put the x-hatch to such horrible use just for you personally. But yes, you are quite right, it is actually canon that Spode likes women's lingerie!
Not only are they watching, but note Jeeves's response -- he LIKES it.
I was actually quite impressed with how much wrongness I could bung into a mere 100 words.
Think I'm over it though.
{{shudder}}.

[godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com]

I think that Roderick Spode would have been able to make a silk satin floral lace-trimmed X-hatch for just such an eventuality.

I do believe, though, that Jeeves does not like it... he's horrified and trying to protect Bertie by distracting him. This one should really go in the hurt/comfort drabbles. Yes, that's my story and I am sticking with it.