This is very, very good. Bertie not wanting to leave Jeeves and not entirely in the know about why, exactly, he doesn't want to leave Jeeves -- oh, YES. And Jeeves's state of mind is a bit of a mystery to us as well. "My dear Mr. Wooster": telling, that. Jeeves slipping a bit? Plus, you've really got the voices.
Do you mind a typo correction? It's that "tried to dab discretely" should be "tried to dab discreetly."
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Date: 2011-12-05 09:19 pm (UTC)Do you mind a typo correction? It's that "tried to dab discretely" should be "tried to dab discreetly."