Wow! Incredible, riveting story! I love your Bertie voice!
I love this: I often found myself thinking that if he were a woman, I would have dropped to my knees and eloped at once. I would never let him from the marriage bed. I would keep his belly full with child, if only he were a woman, and if only I were a man who loved women. A man who loves another man can only growl in frustration, and a man who lusts for a servant is a cad and a devil.
My favourite part: The foolish cad begged mercy, and cried unmanly tears, and offered up to half his kingdom if the adored one would only forgive and forget…
And the servant-god pulled the drunken fool up by his lapels, and kissed him, roughly.
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Date: 2011-09-11 11:03 am (UTC)I love this: I often found myself thinking that if he were a woman, I would have dropped to my knees and eloped at once. I would never let him from the marriage bed. I would keep his belly full with child, if only he were a woman, and if only I were a man who loved women. A man who loves another man can only growl in frustration, and a man who lusts for a servant is a cad and a devil.
My favourite part: The foolish cad begged mercy, and cried unmanly tears, and offered up to half his kingdom if the adored one would only forgive and forget…
And the servant-god pulled the drunken fool up by his lapels, and kissed him, roughly.
I love that! I can just picture this.
I love the hot little part that follows!
Such a perfect fic!