Date: 2010-11-14 07:44 am (UTC)
This was lovely, and I thought pretty spot on character wise, but I'm pretty new here myself. One thing kind of jumped out at me, the paragraph were Bertie is hauling Jeeves to the bathroom. If you're going with a Fry and Laurie body type, which I tend to do cause I saw them before I read the books, it's kind of hard to imagine Bertie being able to pick him up and carry him to the bed, even stopping on the way to grab a towel. But that could just be me.
It is a lovely little plot device, it's even over on the kink meme, if you know about all that. It is a good story, well written and I enjoyed it!
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