I think it would change the idea I was trying to convey, though, which is that Jeeves feels uncharacteristically helpless in this situation, particularly in reclaiming Bertie. If he felt sure enough to think that he had the situation under control enough to make Bertie his, and more importantly do it twice, he would be acting much differently.
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Date: 2009-08-25 02:06 am (UTC)