This is, so far, rather promising, and extremely well written, in this bit the dialogue and behaviour of the characters are brilliant, marvelously portrayed Jeeves, you did a great job showing both the stony, perfect-valet façade, and his little pangs of emotion/ surprise / inner working, I'm particularly approving of the bit in which he truly expected some sort of repercussion at describing his gentleman as not being "altogether intelligent", the subtly growing concern and guilt, as well as the ending, which is brilliant, perfectly Wodehousean while in an un-Wodehousean situation. I'll be looking forward to the following bit, and I hope it to be just as well written as this.
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Date: 2009-08-09 05:51 pm (UTC)