A wonderful beginning! I'm looking forward to seeing more.
“I am sure Mr Wooster can look after himself.” Then, there was a dead silence. Clearly both men had thought the same thing simultaneously. Whatever Bertram Wooster’s many wonderful personality traits, he’d never been accused of being independently-minded or overly-scrupulous.
This is a great passage.
(On a formatting note, a extra line space between each paragraph would make it easier to read.)
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Date: 2009-08-08 10:38 pm (UTC)“I am sure Mr Wooster can look after himself.”
Then, there was a dead silence. Clearly both men had thought the same thing simultaneously. Whatever Bertram Wooster’s many wonderful personality traits, he’d never been accused of being independently-minded or overly-scrupulous.
This is a great passage.
(On a formatting note, a extra line space between each paragraph would make it easier to read.)