Thank you! The one POV is tough because in order to show Bertie's POV, I have to have a lot of dialogue. There are other ways to show his point of view, but things like expressions only go so far. I might could add chapters from Bertie's POV, but I'm not sure I could switch POVs in the middle of chapters and still have it read smoothly. Will have to see what happens in my future writing.
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Date: 2009-05-11 04:17 am (UTC)