Another sex!fail fic
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niektete 's sex!fail challenge.I just can't help myself. This will mark the second "naughty" piece I have ever written, the first being the previous sex!fail I posted.
Title: Choke
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jeeves/Bertie
Author:
chaoschick13 Warnings: It gets messy.
Disclaimer: While I cannot say for certain what dear Plum would say about this (he would probably have a fit), I would like to think that he would at least find it mildly humorous. My hat is off to him, the creator of these wonderful characters.
A/N: Many thanks to
eve_sundancer for beta-ing this thing and encouraging me to post it.
Choke
A rather demanding and unavoidable invitation to Brinkley Court had kept Jeeves from laying hands on his lover for a full week. Of course, he had taken every opportunity to subtly make his presence known: a heated glance while serving drinks, a warm breath on the back of the neck at the dinner table, a hand skimming ever so slightly along in pretext of lighting a cigarette.
Finally back in their flat in London, Jeeves carefully locked the door, set the luggage on the floor and pinned Bertie to the wall. He spent a good deal of time working Bertie into a moaning mess, one hand holding both of Bertie’s high above his head, kissing him until he almost fainted from lack of oxygen. The other hand Jeeves put to good use deftly opening the fly of Bertie’s trousers, only having the slightest bit of trouble due to how tented the material had become.
Jeeves abandoned Bertie’s lips, released his hands and slid to his knees. Bertie’s hands followed Jeeves’ head on the way down and buried themselves in Jeeves’ hair, gripping with the intent to maneuver him towards his heavily leaking cock.
He should have expected it really; what with all the slow teasing he had made Bertie suffer through over the past week. Jeeves only had enough time to bob his head twice before Bertie came, catching Jeeves completely off guard. At that exact moment Jeeves had unfortunately chosen to try to take a breath through his nose, thereby aspirating quite a large amount of come.
Jeeves pulled away from Bertie, spluttering and spattering Bertie’s trousers, semen dripping down his chin, down his neck and under the collar of his shirt. More come dribbled onto his waistcoat, the white fluid marring his immaculate clothes.
Coughing himself hoarse, eyes watering, Jeeves used Bertie’s legs to haul himself up. Another violent set of coughs forced come into his sinuses, a thick and full feeling he would not soon forget. He could barely manage the smallest of breaths; each intake gurgled slightly in the back of his throat, threatening another fit of coughs. Jeeves blundered towards the kitchen, hoping for some water. Bertie, finally catching on, took his arm and led him there.
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Date: 2009-03-13 05:08 am (UTC)Good job!
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Date: 2009-03-13 07:59 am (UTC)Same here, quite lovely images made their nest in my brain. ^^ Well done!
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Date: 2009-03-13 08:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-13 09:04 am (UTC)(Not that i'm complaining,of course.)
You're very good at writing naughty pieces (as i knew you would be), please write more!
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Date: 2009-03-13 12:20 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-13 03:34 pm (UTC)This was quite well done! Poor Jeeves! How unpleasant an interruptus for their barely-begun coitus! I likes me some passionate Jeeves!
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Date: 2009-03-13 08:15 pm (UTC)The Lady 529
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Date: 2009-03-13 10:17 pm (UTC)ERM...
Thanks!
And we still rock.
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Date: 2009-03-13 11:54 pm (UTC)Second half = poor Jeeves!!
A great drabble indeed.
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Date: 2009-03-14 01:43 am (UTC)AND....love ur icon. Calvin is awesome.
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