My sister (who doesn't really read J&W fiction) agrees that she would totally read that!
My vote goes for Bertie POV, because not only is your bertie voice DEAD ON, It would be just too perfect for describing... what he's seeing, if you know what I mean!
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Date: 2008-09-30 02:28 am (UTC)My sister (who doesn't really read J&W fiction) agrees that she would totally read that!
My vote goes for Bertie POV, because not only is your bertie voice DEAD ON, It would be just too perfect for describing... what he's seeing, if you know what I mean!