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Remembrance


Sorry I missed this yesterday - still ill!:(

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Date: 2012-11-10 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
Drabble: It takes us all


A flash of red drew the e. from the steaming tea held aloft in the Jeevesian hand like a sacred thing proffered by a high priest of one of the posher cults. Red rimmed his e.s as well. I plucked the poppy from his trembling fingers, tucked it into his buttonhole with a kiss. The noble head bowed to my shoulder.
“I apologize.”
“None of that. It takes us all like this today.”
We met after separate stints at the Drones and the Junior Ganymede. So many friends had been snuffed out. Jeeves and Bertram curled up together and wept.

Date: 2012-11-10 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawnnun.livejournal.com
The Things I'm Glad We Cannot Share

I had no idea Jeeves has even been in it until his first Remembrance Day in my employ, when he brought in the morning Darjeeling and asked for a bit of time off that evening to see old friends. I had told him that of course he might, and also offered a little advance on his pay to treat them if he needed it. My paragon politely declined, and left just after dinner.

I only realized when he came back half-drunk, listing a bit and gazing deeply into my eyes and whispering, "I thank god you were not there, sir."

Date: 2012-11-10 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawnnun.livejournal.com
This is why my headcanon is that Bertie just baaaaarely too young, because the thought of him sobbing over all his dead friends just fucking kills me. And because it makes his bounciness more comprehensible. Well, without the brilliant and angsty 'Green Ice' solution, anyway.

Date: 2012-11-10 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
I'm thinking of this as Post WW2... but even if Bertie was just barely too young for WW1, he would have known cousins and schoolfellows and uncles who served, not to mention the flu pandemics he'd have live through. Grim.

Date: 2012-11-10 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
Oh!! I'm all welling up over here....poor dears.

Date: 2012-11-10 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawnnun.livejournal.com
Ah, yes.

And yeah, I have always wanted Bertie's wartime story on my timescale. I have a vast and moribund project that needed a chronology, so for me Bertie was born in 1900 and just barely too young.

Date: 2012-11-10 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
My 'spyverse' Bertie is the same age as yours, maybe a little younger....

but more interestingly... vast, moribund project? That sounds simply delightful. Is there any of that available to read anywhere?

Date: 2012-11-10 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diminua.livejournal.com
Drabble: Pause.

‘Doesn’t look as if we’ll get to Berkeley Square by 11 does it?’

‘No sir.’ My new valet, a dark haired cove, took my meaning at once. ‘Perhaps it would be best if I pull over.’

‘I think so Jeeves. Always bad around Piccadilly.’

‘Thank you sir.’

A solemn chap - impossible to tell if he’s always like that of course – Jeeves’ head remained bowed over his hands all the time we stood silent by the car. I wondered if he was praying but didn’t like to mention it.

Then he handed me a fresh handkerchief, and we continued home.

Date: 2012-11-10 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
How lovely and sad and poignant!

Date: 2012-11-11 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krisreinke.livejournal.com
“I should volunteer, Jeeves. Not that I’d like war, and it’s doubtful how much help I’d really be, but they’re asking…”

“No. sir.”

“They’ve written all the old Magdalene grads. Severe officer shortage, so the provost says. Says those of us still single should sign up.”

“No. Sir.”

“It’s not like I’d be heading to the front lines.”

“No.”

“This wars different. Its’ not like when you….”

Jeeves shut Bertie’s lips with a kiss.

“Dash it, Reg! There was a Wooster at the battle of Agincourt.”

“Should Henry the Fifth invade France again, you may join him with my blessings.”

Date: 2012-11-11 05:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] athena-crikey.livejournal.com
DRABBLE

At ten o’clock I removed my fingers from the typewriter’s keys. The page was blank, as it had been an hour ago.

“Creative juices blocked today, sir?” asked Jeeves, arriving with his heavenly coffee.

“It would seem so.” I rose to look out the window; the crowds were already gathering.

“When I returned, the War was in everything I read; I never wanted to hear about it again – nor did any bloke I knew.” I grasped the Flanders poppy over my heart. “I won’t write it.”

“No one thinks that means you’ve forgotten, sir,” whispered Jeeves, and pressed my arm.

Date: 2012-11-11 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krisreinke.livejournal.com
Interesting. Very.
Most seem to consider ( if they wonder at all) that Bertie somehow missed the war ( Or that Woodehouse for some reason want's us to think so, given how the war is never mentioned). I like the idea of the Great War being unmentioned because Bertie finds it *unmentionable*.

Date: 2012-11-11 01:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
Aw!!

....I always find it amusing when Bertie uses the Agincourt reference because the whole reason for the French loss was the longbow.

Date: 2012-11-11 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
A lot of unmentionable stuff happened then... no one wrote very much about the flu pandemic, either, and that killed more people than the war. I can't really imagine how horrifying it all must have been....

Date: 2012-11-11 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
How right Jeeves is, as usual....

Date: 2012-11-11 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krisreinke.livejournal.com
Not sure where this came from. Not a drabble. MIGHT be a section of something large, should Musey give me the rest of the Christmas story. (There’s half a Jeeves in draft… so we shall see how things pair up.) So, for all its insufficiencies and flaws… offered for your enjoyment.



“Milord? You feeling…”

Bertram Wooster dropped the picture. By fortune it fell to the table he had forgotten was below that particular elbow. He’d been quite lost in thought, or rather in the lack of useful thoughts, and whatever image had been before his hooded eyes had been quite other than the faded furnishing of this narrow parlor.

“Just… remembering.” He let the young woman fluff the lap robe closer around him. In the grate the fire had died to white ash, leaving the room slipping that last line into chill.

“Afore the war?”

He looked up, taking in the flat, plain face and contradicted by her bright eyes. Clever eyes, so much like…

“Were you here when Jeeves ruled the roost?”

She shook her head. “Only saw Sergeant Jeeves the once, and that was when they was mustering out.” Finished with her fussing, she collected the fallen photo and set it gently back on the mantle ledge. “You took the whole household to Dover to see the troops off, and I thank you for that, sir. Last time I saw my Danny.”

Bertie arched an eyebrow. His memory wasn’t what it had been, not since London, and there had been so many changes.

“Lad I came to replace? Danny Winsters, gone with the 17th Lancastershire. You remember him?” She paused, giving her listener time to pull the bits together.

“Blond lad? Footman sort?”

Her smile turned her face beautiful. “That’s my Danny!”

“Cheerful chap. I may not have much upstairs,” Bertie tapped his scared temple, “but I do remember a bright smile.”

“You should have one – a smile I mean.” She circled sound the room, bringing order to the books and magazines. “Here as its Christmas Eve, and Mrs. Huston’s making potatoes with bacon. Half an hour – no more – and she sent me to ask if you want yours here or in the dining room.”

Accepting his cane, he pushed to his feet.

“Potatoes with bacon?” Bertie did a fine job of sounding impressed. Which he was. Rationing had been hard, and much of the stores laid down before the war had been given to those harder hit. “Not a goose and pudding, but then we can’t have all we want.”

He wanted the table downstairs, where there would be some sort of company and music not pressed for the phonograph, but that would ruin their holiday more than it would make his… and really, what Bertie would be looking for in the servants dining room? Well, it wouldn’t be there.

She stood aside to let him pass. “Victory soon, and then the lads will be home. That’s what I want.”

“What we all want.” Bertie paused at the doorway, allowing one glance back at the images of happier times. “For our lads to come home.”

Date: 2012-11-11 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
Tear-jerkingly moving... more, please!

Date: 2012-11-11 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] athena-crikey.livejournal.com
My personal headcanon is PTSD memory wipe for the entire war period, but I think this is eminently more probable. Peter Wimsey in one of the Sayers books says that he took up reading detective novels after the war and a nasty break-up because they were the only thing that didn't have the war or love in them - this might also explain Bertie's taste in novels.

Date: 2012-11-12 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tuzzy.livejournal.com
Oh...image of Bertie waiting for him makes me want to cry.

Date: 2012-11-13 01:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawnnun.livejournal.com
Well, there was some Holmes/Raffles and Watson/Bunny called 'For God and Country', but I keep forgetting where I left it.

Date: 2012-11-13 01:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawnnun.livejournal.com
Aaaaaww. In my head, this particular Bertie hangs out with Lord Peter Wimsey.

Date: 2012-11-13 01:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawnnun.livejournal.com
Oh god, my brain. No, brain, we do not need to write an Avengers fusion with Bertie as Hawkeye, shut the hell up.

Anyway, this is absolutely adorable and I love it. Bless you Jeeves, and your most justified nolle prosequi ever.

Date: 2012-11-13 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawnnun.livejournal.com
I have to agree, as much as it wrings my poor little heart.

Date: 2012-11-13 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
Ah... those things will happen to the best of us...

Date: 2012-11-13 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com
Oh, no....

but soft, perhaps 'we' (read: you and the Jeeves brain) do need to write such a thing... just a drabble wouldn't be too terrible? Or, that fan_flashworks place would also be a great place to post a nice, little ficlet to an audience that might like both fandoms....
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