Beta Help Again

[elliemorris.livejournal.com]

Hello everyone, I'm writing a new Jeeves and Wooster fanfiction that I started in August, and I need some help, if you please. I haven't been writing much lately, so I'm rather out of the practice, especially with fanfiction. I just need some help to get the ball rolling and generate some plot ideas further.
It's a Jeeves/Blandings crossover with a Bertie/Jeeves pairing, where the Efficient Baxter finds out that they are in love before Jeeves and Bertie figure it out for themselves. I know what I want to happen in the end, but I'm unsure how to put it all together realisticly, and how Baxter could infer their love without it being obvious. Any ideas?

Comments

[jasperjasper.livejournal.com]

I like your idea. I think Baxter was described as having 'no vices' other than greed: Maybe he's even apathetic to Jeeves and Bertie once he realizes they aren't a threat to his plans to marry. I wonder if he's even a catalyst for their relationship: he knows they're made for each other and if he can get them together then Bertie won't stay engaged to the girl he wants.