Beta Help Again

[elliemorris.livejournal.com]

Hello everyone, I'm writing a new Jeeves and Wooster fanfiction that I started in August, and I need some help, if you please. I haven't been writing much lately, so I'm rather out of the practice, especially with fanfiction. I just need some help to get the ball rolling and generate some plot ideas further.
It's a Jeeves/Blandings crossover with a Bertie/Jeeves pairing, where the Efficient Baxter finds out that they are in love before Jeeves and Bertie figure it out for themselves. I know what I want to happen in the end, but I'm unsure how to put it all together realisticly, and how Baxter could infer their love without it being obvious. Any ideas?

Comments

[missjeckle.livejournal.com]

How about this: Lord E questions Baxter's sanity (canon), brings in Sir Roderick Glossop, who Baxter has consulted (canon), G knows B is sane, so he spends time gossiping rather than examining B (I always thought G very indiscreet about his patients, telling Bertie about the man who thought he was a canary), G is also 'treating' Bertie and let's slip something that gets Baxter thinking. Or G could say something more general about people in love often repressing their feelings from themselves, and B goes on the hunt for repressed feelings and finds them in all sorts of places, some of which are way off the mark, so its just by chance he gets it right with Bertie and Jeeves.

[elliemorris.livejournal.com]

Thanks very much for the ideas! They're great, just what I was looking for, so I think I'll incorporate some of them into my story. However, I've had the idea that Bertie already knows how he feels about Jeeves, and Jeeves somehow lets on that he returns those feelings.