For various RL reasons I've not been on LJ for ages so after chapter 13 I'd lost track of this fic - so, I'm delighted to catch up with it again. I re-read the whole fic plus the old fanfic which prompted it. All of it is utterly delightful and a joy to read. You have caught their characters and 'voices' perfectly.
Thanks so much.
(Off now to do one or two of the chores I should have been doing instead of reading all day. )