This will be a fun story because you can give Honoria a voice. We know she's decisive and likes having her own way, but we don't know much more. You've done a lovely job here, and she's bossing Bertie around just like I'd expect her to do.

The only thing I might have added are a few lines where Honoria could show she's puzzled by Bertie's lack of, er, manly urges. Or was it common in those days for the couple to wait a few days before consummating the marriage? That I don't know.

I'm looking forward to the next installment.