oh, please, I've been trying to comb through and find them all, but every time I fix one it seems it causes more, in some way. My lack of spelling skills don't help any. Typos are an awful awful thing-they're so damn hard to avoid.

Yeah, it's truncated, because plot apparently takes thought, and I'm only good for thinking for about three hours a day, and I never realized that, having mostly written one-shots in the past. I've gone from having to think through one concept start to finish to having to think through multiple side plots and how to string them all together, and a challenge response with a deadline was NOT the best way to leap in both feet first.