I'd recently posted a possessive!Jeeves fic myself, but I definitely think yours was better written and, more importantly, not written from the perspective of going-insane!Jeeves. Also, it's interesting how it's so hard to tell exactly how Jeeves sees their relationship, because you've got a little bit of everything in there. A little slash, a little surrogate-parent, a little ownership, etc.

Welcome to the comm!