ext_87021 ([identity profile] storyfan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] indeedsir_backup 2009-05-11 05:12 am (UTC)

Yes, it was, but after so many chapters in one POV, it would be awkward to change all of a sudden. By the way, the image of Heflner running barefoot to see Bertie was just stellar. It showed just how distraught he was without saying he was distraught.

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