ext_117715 ([identity profile] emeraldreeve.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] indeedsir_backup 2008-09-26 08:29 am (UTC)

Thank you very much for the review and letting me know what you especially liked! I think Jeeves had a very strong will power, but giving up smoking has to be so difficult. I've been told that the cravings are pretty awful, and I didn't want to make light of it. So many people have struggled with this issue. When I was researching the history of smoking for this chapter, I was surprised that some doctors had considered smoking good for a person. By 1939, the knowledge that it was unhealthy was out there, but not fully agreed upon, and not as well known by people as it is today.

I tend to see Jeeves as very knowledgeable, too, and what he says being fact.

I'm so glad you care about my OCs. Highlighting the strength of Jeeves and Wooster's relationship is one of their purposes, but I want them to have life of their own, too.

The next chapter won't show Bertie giving up smoking, but I'm not dropping the subject. I will be showing it in the story so you will see how he does.

The next chapter will be going to my beta this weekend.

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