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[godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com]

Hello kind community members.

I normally blithely post things and let the chips fall (Apologies if that was unmannerly--I happened upon this community after getting hooked on the work of Mice and Random Nexus in Ao3).

I have something in the hopper that's been giving me pause and was wondering if there were any brave souls willing to give it a glance?  It's the sequel to that last 'spyverse' tale (no one dies and the ending is happy). It's longish--about 17,000 words, and any help would be deeply appreciated.

Rummy comment warning: things got a bit out of hand in crack pairing land.  Please be cautious with the links. AND also the lower comments... please keep animals (especially newts) and small children away

Comments

[laeticiav.livejournal.com]

Your first sentence there is amazing because it starts off seeming to imply something HORRIBLE ("Gussie cringing on top of") then briefly seems to become less horrific when it reveals that Gussie is cringing on top of the wardrobe, not on top of Spode (bottom!Spode, well, of course) and then becomes terrible once again with the juxtaposition of toga and wooing. Well done. Or not.

... wait, I just clicked on your link. DAMN YOU! DASH IT! You will regret this!

[godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com]

As if I did not regret it before i even wrote it down... brrr